1) How does chocolate room look like?
2) What will happen if Charlie sees the chocolate room?
3) Did Mr.Wanka like those five children when he saw them?
4) Why people extremely wanted to go to chocolate factory?
5) Why Mr.Wanka wanted only FIVE children to be at chocolate factory?
Tuesday, November 17, 2009
Monday, November 9, 2009
Reflection of retelling tale

During the ESL course I have learned many myth stories. The story that I chose was "An Orphan Boy" and I needed to retell the story that I have learned. I believe the SLR that my project best showed is Think Creatively.
Making a story up I was reluctant to do since I prefer drawing to writing stories. Yet, while I was creating a story, I became more creative than ever and my concerns about writing was absolutely wrong. Moreover, trying to think about the story, which was "An Orphan Boy," I truly wanted to use strong and obvious words to describe the story. To do that I also needed to think imaginatively.
One thing that I should improve on was putting more characters in my tale. It was because I only had two characters, which might make the story boring. Next time, I would like to try to put more characters in it.
On the other hand, I had a great job to write a new story. My tale went step-by-step. It went really clearly that people could understand what I was trying to talk about. At the same time my story was not that predictable so people kept thinking what might be happen at the end of the story.
I exerted all my efforts to the story. If I have a chance to write a story again, I would try the other way to create the tales.
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